a love song

A love song

by ts

:

when we first met, i enjoyed your presence

and i feel special when you say my name

you're the one who i again want to see

my heart is wild and you are my aim

Love- is a feeling of: deep connection

what i feel for you is a special love

even when i am too busy to write

you are the one who I am thinking of

very often i imagine your face

when internet pages are loading slow

Though i do not reply, to S-M-S

i have read them and plan to tell you so

(I enjoy reading your e-mails

and your attached photos cause me to smile)

Love- is a feeling of deep connection

what i feel for you is a special love

even when i am too busy to write

you are the one who I am thinking of

:

when I frustrate you- but still

I keep loving you until

we can meet and talk and giggle once again

note: in version one skip the two-line-stanza in parentheses, so it is simply a four stanza poem about love with ten syllables per line and rhyme abcb ending of and the last line may be repeated slowly in conclusion. version one ends marked by : symbol.

in second version it is my personal blend of words with a beautifal melody used in "colors of the wind" see link below, which is so beautiful i often cry when i hear the melody so i worded to match that melody

if so i suggest that melody [sung by pocahontas in Disney's Pocahontas] with a slight adjustment

stanza 1 twice parallel to the stanzas:

"you think you own..." and

"you think the only people"

next the stanza "love" parallel to "have you ever"

the stanza "very often" parallel to repeating "you think you own" again

and stanza "I enjoy" [skipped in version one to make a 4 stanza poem of equal stanzas, now can be used in this version] parallel to "how high" then repeat "love" parallel to "have you ever"

the finale parallel to: "you can own the earth but still"
lyric link
http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/classicdisney/colorsofthewind.htm

a powerful combination!