יום שלישי, 30 בדצמבר 2014

dragon wars conclusion

until now: kernel cartern returned from gathering intel in eastern europe and reported why the polish cavalry is fighting.
upon his return he was granted the rank general for a successful mission in dangerous circumstances
for the past years since his return he trained with soldiers to liberate france. in preparation many air missions were carried out by both nazi and allied air to shoot down the dragons. many planes from both sides werelost to the agile dragons and their fire but eventually enough were shot down but the nazis would not abandon the airfields so general cartern led the invasion to free france from the nazis who assisted against the dragon but also acted as if france was their  own. fo course the dragon oart would be hard to believe so the people were told a different tale. sadly cartern drowned on d-day and his tale was hidden until the discovery of his strange diary and declassifying because fact is stranger than fiction. the generals who survived the invasion were the famous ones and cartern was hidden for his secret mission in eastern europe
end.

יום שני, 29 בדצמבר 2014

Christmas and Brumalia

around 2,000,000,000 two billion christians celebrated christmas eve with many non-christians.
once claimed to be the date Jesus was baptised-
though the water would have been cold!
some wrote around 320 AD Jesus was born on this date yet the gospels lack any basis for Jesus or his disciples celebrating any date for his birth and the book of acts 2 has the apostles GATHER on the JEW-HOLIDAY pentecost and lacks any foundtaion that they celebrated jesus's birth at all on any date and any claim that they did on this date 25 is baseless.
internet stats show that the word "brumalia" was not popular, however "this word increased significantly in lookups over the past seven days." [22-29] in the week of christmas because people are becoming aware of the coinciding date.
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/brumalia
Full Definition of BRUMALIA:  a pagan festival held at the winter solstice"
which WAS 25 december as a more detailed website explains: 
http://www.ancientworlds.net/aw/Article/1328585
The Brumalia was an ancient Roman festival honoring Saturn, Ops, and Bacchus. The festival lasted thirty days and ended on December 25, the day designated on the old Julian calendar as the winter solstice. " now we see that this solstice was not OUR 21 but the date 25
clearly as a compromise not to LOSE the finale "end on 25" the ancient christians included this date as a holiday with a new name
if you want to celebrate the renewal of the sun cycle then the date would be 22 december- the day after the shortest day when the days elongate- for the tree which needs the sun and the colored ball decorations for the sun and its light.
another coincidence is that the mention of december 25 as the birth day of jesus by certain "church father" was AFTER 273 after "December 25 was also considered to be the birthday of Sol Invictis, a Syrian deity whose cult was introduced by Aurelian in AD 273. " so the websites conclusion to separate them is just to comfort the appalled christians who cannot deny the coincidince of the word "birth".
so if you want to be like the original christians DO celebrate jew-holidays like pentecost.
to claim the original christians or the christ celebrated the birth of christs body is baseless because there is no such idea in the gospels nor in acts.
similarly Passover was celebrated by jesus in the gospels and that is when to celebrate "easter" not any "easter date" which last year different churches celebrated on different days. so do not take sides in the easter conflict just celebrate on the jewish passover!

יום שני, 22 בדצמבר 2014

eye-rhyme

in addition to common rhymes in which a pair of words sound the same, it is also art to use words that rhyme to the eye
expanding poetry beyond this cannot justly be called art and only in some cases can be justly considered literature. sadly our culture lowers and lowers the quality and calls art unjustly without skill nor beauty it is not art but truly "comforting a young child's failure" and not justice when they repeat it as an adult
example of an eye rhyme in couplet:
you never call
you say you shall
i hate your lie
i hope you die!
this is an eye-rhyme in couplet because your eyes see a rhyme despite the difference we say the word: shall.
in contrast the pair lie:die are both eye and common rhymes-
and easy to write and spot
the challenge is making the lines equal and using words that are not eye-rhymes for ear-rhymes
such as love:of.
someone who can say a message with these conditions can justly earn the title of art.
i mean if someone succeeds at writing words that do not say a message or do not belong together:
my house is tall
you said you shall
i color dye
soon i will die
these phrases do not belong together and only in poor quality can be called a rhyme or "art" for the eye-rhyme
worse, there is plenty
i like eating tall
fish is good shall
so we should try to encourage "art" despite raising the standard- not by enlarging art to include encompass poor quality! and not encourage unskilled in the name of art!

יום ראשון, 21 בדצמבר 2014

dragon wars 9

the new fench parliament had a solution for the hungry dragons
for years nazi germany had been talking about the bad-jews and the body of jews can be a source of food for the dragons and that would make everyone happy. in the summer of 1941 the new french parliement contacted the nazi government asking for help in getting the jewish bodies to france. in excahenge they became "officialy" submissive retroactvely from 1940 and germany began sending the jewish bodies to feed the dragons. that summer nazi-germany invaded russia and local people supported these killing squads called einsatzgruppen, "one of the main tasks of which was to kill all Jewish men, women and children in the areas that were being conquered. By December 1941, over 500,000 Soviet Jews had been murdered." relevant o our story is that the bodies were cremated- but not in ovens but by the dragons in france. "However, for the Nazis leadership, conventional killing methods were insufficient and inefficient. On 20 January 1942, 15 leading officials of the Nazi state met at a villa in Wannsee, a suburb of Berlin, to discuss how to more efficiently supply the dragons.
at this conference called wannsee "most of the Jews of German-occupied Europe would be deported to Poland and murdered. Conference attendees included representatives from several government ministries, including state secretaries from the Foreign Office, the justice, interior, and state ministries, and representatives from the Schutzstaffel (SS). In the course of the meeting, Heydrich outlined how European Jews would be rounded up from west to east and sent to extermination camps in the General Government (the occupied part of Poland), where they would be killed." actually that was just to fool the soldiers but the real purpose was the protection of france by supplying the hungry dragons with bodies to burn.
for years more and more "outcasts" were put on trains to poland but stopped minutes after they left the french city for the dragons to burn the wooden boxcars with their outcasts and eat the sweet ash in addition to many bodies from poland. i hope to conclude with the french "raffle" and kernel cartern's promotion

יום שישי, 19 בדצמבר 2014

dragon wars 8

until now: ill dragons came to our planet and our virus attacked their bacteria infections. the recovered dragons have attacked the building of the government of france by ripping the roof off and standing by the exits. they learned the language quickly because humans cannot speak dragonese-
:
after ripping off the roof of the building the dragons watched the people scream and run. they saw that the direction the humans ran was toward wood triangles so the dragons flew to those doors and roared. the security  force inside threw down their bodies and crawled. the handguns popped-out useless tiny pebbles at the huge dragons.
woyn roared in french "silence!" which is the french word for "silence", and the humens froze. "who will co-operate with us in our needs?"
the group of parliement members [now called national assembely] voted quickly!
three shouted "wi" yes and two shouted no=no and the rest abstained-
which is common in many governments on our planet.
the dragons tried to be patient, although this angered them very much, because they desired cooperation!
woyn said all who will co-operate should stand to my right side. but only one of them obeyed. woyn continued "i am happy you are cooperating you will not be harmed whoever wants to join him come now." the two others who had voted yes changed their mind and said to others "do not submit to force" [the opposite of what historians tell us about a fast surrender to germany] but one abstainer took sides and joined the diplomat to the dragon's right. woyn asked do all of you actually refuse?
"no!" the crowd roared. woyn roared louder then join these two!" "no!" they roared again.
a younger dragon tried a new tactic and asked "who wants to oppose our will?" when only six said "we will not submit to force," winyr, the young dragon said "stand away from the fools!"and flamed a warning blast of fire stright up into the air. the six and several others ran toward winyr.
woyn announced to the crowd in the middle: "how dare you call yourself leaders if you cannot decide this is your last chance to take sides before we put in you prison!" one more joined each group and the others stood still.
in his rage woyn lost his temper and blasted the wimpy-wishy-washy humans with a stream of fire and swept across the crowd.
winyr followed the leader and blasted the opposition with fire. then to keep their word they mswept the ashes with their tails and and separated a portion of ash to put in prison and next, because dragons eat ash, ate the rest licking the sweet ash with long dragon tongues and taking turns in a fair way. the few humasn that said they would cooperate got mad and two said we will not help you, you murderers [i would call them idealists but] the dragons roared "fools you should cooperate" and grabbed the two with their talons which are like long fingers of claws and flew high up and then simply opened the claws so they fell screaming to the street. the remaining governemnt officials immediately voted unanimously to cooperate and cancelled all employment of all lower government officials in order tto pass a new emergency budget.

יום שלישי, 16 בדצמבר 2014

a love song

A love song
by ts
:
when we first met, i enjoyed your presence
and i feel special when you say my name
you're the one who i again want to see
my heart is wild and you are my aim

Love- is a feeling of: deep connection
what i feel for you is a special love
even when i am too busy to write
you are the one who I am thinking of

very often i imagine your face
when internet pages are loading slow
Though i do not reply, to S-M-S
i have read them and plan to tell you so

(I enjoy reading your e-mails
and your attached photos cause me to smile)

Love- is a feeling of deep connection
what i feel for you is a special love
even when i am too busy to write
you are the one who I am thinking of
:
when I frustrate you- but still
I keep loving you until
we can meet and talk and giggle once again

note: in version one skip the two-line-stanza in parentheses, so it is simply a four stanza poem about love with ten syllables per line and rhyme abcb ending of and the last line may be repeated slowly in conclusion. version one ends marked by : symbol.
in second version it is my personal blend of words with a beautifal melody used in "colors of the wind" see link below, which is so beautiful i often cry when i hear the melody so i worded to match that melody
if so i suggest that melody [sung by pocahontas in Disney's Pocahontas] with a slight adjustment
stanza 1 twice parallel to the stanzas:
"you think you own..." and
"you think the only people"
next the stanza "love" parallel to "have you ever"
the stanza "very often" parallel to repeating "you think you own" again
and stanza "I enjoy" [skipped in version one to make a 4 stanza poem of equal stanzas, now can be used in this version] parallel to "how high" then repeat "love" parallel to "have you ever"
the finale parallel to: "you can own the earth but still"
lyric link
http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/classicdisney/colorsofthewind.htm
a powerful combination!

יום שני, 15 בדצמבר 2014

dragon wars 7

until now: ill dragons came to our planet and the flu virus destroyed their bacterial infection
Woyn led the younger dragons in search of food. he had an idea. instead of simply burning what they saw they would find the organized life-forms leaders and ask them for help. for this goal he led the dragons away from the groups of buildings and flew to a lonely house they landed near the house and listened to the life-forms by the window.
sadly only an hour after dark they stopped talking so the dragons slept while woyn guarded. in the morning woyn rested and the younger ones guarded and listened. by the end of the day they could speak french and woyn knocked on a window and asked in french "where is your king?" a child came to the window and said we do not have a king everyone knows that we have a government in paris. the dragon now showed himself to the young boy by moving his wing into view by the window but the boy could not see the wing in the dark so he asked woyn where are you? woyn said i do not want to scare you just te,, me how to get to paris
everyone knows you must go south
what is south?
the boy pointed and the dragons flew to paris
they slept outside of the city and in the morning they flew around the city and people screamed.
the police shot tiny metal pellets which only stung a bit and woyn asked a police how to get to the government in paris the cop heard the french and said "i am crazy" so he picked him up and flew high and the cop was so frightened that he dropped his gun screaming in horror.
the dragon kept repeating 'where is your government in paris' as he flew higher and higher and finally the human said: there and pointed so woyn led the dragons to the government building where he announced in french he would let this life-form free if they could speak to the leaders
the guards shot many tiny bullets so the dragons used force and ripped off the roof to the biolding they stood by the doors and and when the government were in the center one blew a warning fire and said "silence" which in french is :silence"...